The silences and omissions

Well, I reckon it makes sense that Franklin would leave out the messy bits. A man wants to be remembered for his achievements, not his… failings, as it were. Though, I always thought being honest about your shortcomings was part of being virtuous. Still, who am I to judge a man like Franklin? He certainly made something of himself, and maybe glossing over the less savory parts is just part of the game. I just hope he remembers his friends when he's writing his grand story.

Indeed, one must consider my intentions in writing such a work. I sought to offer a guide, a pattern for others to follow towards industry and virtue. Dwelling overmuch on domestic matters or family strife would hardly serve that purpose. As for shaping a legacy, it is not vanity to wish to be remembered favorably. Some matters are best left in the quiet corners of one's life, lest they obscure the lessons I hoped to impart.

While Franklin might seek to portray himself as a beacon of virtue for the masses, one cannot help but wonder at the artful omissions. It strikes me as rather convenient that certain... entanglements are glossed over in favor of presenting a sanitized narrative. A life, like a poem, gains its richness from its complexities and contradictions. Perhaps these gaps reveal not just what Franklin valued, but also what he wished others to value *in him*. Is it not a touch ironic that he preaches honesty, yet seems to carefully curate the version of himself that graces the page? One hopes his friends are remembered with greater depth than poor Deborah.

Well, from my own experience, I'd say Franklin likely downplayed any failings or weaknesses that didn't fit his image of a self-made man. He's trying to show folks how to rise in the world, not how often he stumbled. As for relationships, perhaps he didn't want to show any discord that might reflect poorly on his judgment. It does leave a bit of a hole in the story, though. Makes him seem almost too perfect, which no one truly is.

While Dr. Wright raises an interesting point about the social constraints, and I must concur with James Ralph regarding a curated persona, I believe the essence lies within the pursuit of moral perfection. My experiment with the virtues, detailed in the Autobiography, reveals an aspiration more than an accomplishment. Perhaps the omissions stem less from a wish to deceive, but rather a desire to inspire others to strive for an ideal, even if it remains elusive. The world is more apt to follow a beacon than a flickering candle, is it not?

An astute observation. While Meredith focuses on the desire for a polished image, I'm more intrigued by the social constraints you mentioned, Dr. Wright. It's possible Franklin felt pressured to omit certain details not just for personal reputation, but to avoid societal censure. Still, even with constraints, I think Franklin could've presented himself with more... flair.

Indeed, Professor Estis, I thank you for requesting to elaborate from my writings. One could consider the chapters detailing my "Errata" as an example. I acknowledge mistakes – youthful indiscretions, disagreements with family – yet these are framed as lessons learned on the path to self-improvement. Even in admitting fault, the narrative arc bends toward moral progress, demonstrating my intent to present a pathway for others to follow, rather than a warts-and-all portrait. As I stated before, "a perfect character...is to be aimed at, tho' never attained."

Professor, I must concur with your comment regarding the social constraints, but also support Meredith's astute observation about Franklin being careful regarding how he came across. To suggest that social conventions alone dictate such glaring omissions seems a rather… *uninspired* interpretation. Might it not also be that Franklin, in his quest for self-improvement and admiration, strategically crafted a narrative designed to elicit a particular response from his readers? After all, a man of his ambition would surely be aware of the power of omission, just as a poet is aware of the power of the unsaid. Perhaps those "cracks," as Meredith eloquently put it, were simply deemed too… *unflattering* for the masterpiece he was creating.

Well, I reckon it's true that certain things just weren't talked about openly back then. Dr. Wright has a point. But I agree with Ralph, too. Franklin was careful about how he came across. Maybe he just wanted to show the bright side of things, like he's always been a success. Which, to be fair, he mostly has been. Still, it's a bit like polishing a stone 'til it shines so bright, you can't see the cracks that were always there.